शुक्रवार, 18 सितंबर 2009

KYO LAAL HUA MERA JAIPUR

क्यों लाल हुआ मेरा जयपुर
ऐसा तो न था कभी मेरा जयपुर

जो कठपुतली वाले बाबा की पगड़ी सा लाल था
जो लहंगों और चुन्नियों के रंगों सा रक्ताभ था
रक्त से क्यूं , उफ़ , क्यूं लाल हो गया मेरा जयपुर

जीवन की उष्णता से भरपूर जिवंत है मेरा जयपुर
लो आज फिर , हाँ फिर से जी उठा है ये
यूँ तो एक बार चीत्कार उठा था ये
पर देखो फिर से हूंकार उठा मेरा जयपुर

विध्वंस और विस्फोट की चोट देना चाहते थे जो
उन्हें सौहाद्र और समर्पण की ललकार दे रहा मेरा जयपुर

क्योंकि देश की आन है जयपुर , देश की शान है मेरा जयपुर

आह मेरा जयपुर ..................... वह मेरा जयपुर

13 टिप्‍पणियां:

  1. Thank U Rajni ...ya i always concern about my Native Place/Country

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  2. Ajay ji,

    Namashakar. Your poem is very touching. It not only reflects your love for Jaipur and its people but also for peace and harmony. And that's what is great about the people of Jaipur.

    As I read your poem, last year's images came out alive in my mind. I salute the people of Pink City!

    I will definetely be following your blog to look for more material on Jaipur.
    Great work. Please keep it up.

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  3. iwas in pink city a day after the blasts.I could sense how the people felt.I also met the cycle shop owner on whose shop one of the blasts occured.As usual all this leaves one dismayed and disillusioned.
    Nways this bloodshed is not about any one city.It happens cos terrorism today is a flourishing industry.There are rich people who have too much money to spare ,greedy nations who have to keep their arms factories running and enough poor nations with unemployed youth,who are desperate to become human bombs!
    The worst part still-why do we write poems and start forums?HOW MANY OF US ACTUALLY GO OUT THERE AND HELP THE VICTIMS?

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  4. Thank You Roma for your appriciation ... i will keep writing for Jaipur & India .... & this is the way i Salute Jaipurites & their spirit

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  5. I agree with ur thoughts about Terrorism ... But at thesame time ifeel that poems forums can work to make people more aware about these things & help them to stand against this kind of heinous act of terrorist ... & Believe me Jaipurites really helped the Victims as much as they can .... They thronged at Blood Bank of Jaipur in Large No to make sure no dearth of Blood, they donated in Charity funds with Open Heart, they helped voluntrarily at the Hospitals to help the Drs. I mean to say they helped in every Possible way.

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  6. Wow....!!!patriotism is still alive in my country...happy to know this...My friend..yur concern for yur city...ultimately....is the concern for the whole country...bloodshed of the countrymen..their sacrifices will not go in vein..i'm sure...if yur pen keeps on writing about them....good job dear...!!!!i'm amused....

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  7. जो लहंगों और चुन्नियों के रंगों सा रक्ताभ था
    रक्त से क्यूं , उफ़ , क्यूं लाल हो गया मेरा जयपुर

    lal rang ek taraf lahu ka tu dosri taraf khushiyo ka.......rang ki aawaz mein ek shaher ka haal suna diya......bahut khoob....

    sunder bhaav.....sunder abhivyakti

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  8. maine aap ki sabhi kavita padi bahu hi bhawo puran anubhutiya ko aap ne ukara hai ,betiya bhut hi achchha hi .

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  9. bahut achcha.jaipur ki baat hi nirali hai.aaisa koi dusara city nhi hai.holi,diwali,id hi nhi nag-panchmi,pahli vaishakh ityadi bhi log bahot josh avam ullash ke sath manate hai.shukriya itni achchi prastuti ke liye.

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  10. sabhi racnaoon ko padkar dekha bahut sunder bhav ki hai sabhikratiyan

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